I'm having some problems with POVs. I'm writing a fic at the moment (not TW or DW), narrated by a four year old boy (obsessed with the Daleks, but that's not important just now), but I'm not quite sure how much this should limit what words I use, how complex the syntax is, that kind of thing.
I've got a bit here where he and his Dad are getting
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